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Mar 29, 2011
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ere heart trace
enact
this sun gown warms
streamer lightness
like a halo
adversity is empty
shelved with
motes of touch
I thought I knew
loves striations
falling like spring
snow
sedimentary values
I hear water trickling
and I can feel the falls
jagged rock and foam
freshets
the heart shaped sweetness
a glad smile
that lightness of being
and nights joy burns
like tracer rounds
my heart kicking
and I dream Im
hunting
I dream of forests
and rain at darkness
feel your small
palm against this pain
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
CCfire
14 years 3 months ago
Well I wish I'd written the
Well I wish I'd written the last stanza...small palm against this pain is a wonderful way to end this emotional journey through poetry here. I enjoy the way you use abstract thought with the emotions and feelings.
Nordic cloud
14 years 3 months ago
The halo
The halo
the moat
the aura of velvet gown
as the sun frames
the moon
and blazes the flowers
into a round of seasons...
"and nights joy burns
like tracer rounds
my heart kicking
and I dream Im
hunting"... I smiled specially at this verse
You are all man Steven.
Love from a female.