etching

stone against stone
the great backbone
written from the works
of ice

the glacial tales
spun

and winter small
melts in parking lot edges
the moraine feilds
of coloured scraps

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

brittle light

14 years 2 months ago

I like this one...I could get

I like this one...I could get inside it ...understand it...making for a much greater appreciation of the words, construct, and underlying thought....I've been intrigued with most of your poems but have to admit I don't always get them, but when I find a way in, they are even greater to read and explore and enjoy...startlingly good...

just wanted to let you know how impressive your mind/words are

sincerely