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Sep 05, 2014
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Euphrates
He lays along the banks
Of the Euphrates
Among the dead and dying reeds
Centuries look among cities of stone
Down from heaven
Blackened wings envelope
Misery and retribution
His talons curve into the river clay
Displaying his hold on the earth
And its dying declaration
Shadows on the river converge
Conspiring amongst themselves
About This Poem
Last Few Words: this was a struggle until 4 in the morning it happened in a minute, still needs work
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
club special
10 years 10 months ago
This was a struggle, then 4
This was a struggle, then 4 in the morning, in 1 min done , still rough