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every drop

every drop in the ocean
i'm walking on truth,
on the coals of regret,
the odd broken tooth.

it helps fill the gaps
on one poet's corner
where i showered you flowers
and toed with the fauna

as they licked my arse
'cause that's how it goes.
we may weigh our winters
by a drip on the nose.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: nothing really matters but for the now like a broken trough for a thirsty cow. adieu.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: England

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

7 years 11 months ago

Sounds like...

I would have said; "By a drip from the nose". But nice little poem!
~ Geezer.
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Gunnar Hedlund

Gunnar Hedlund

7 years 10 months ago

i diddly so

thank you muchly for your words. appreciated.

g

p.s. - apologies for the delay.