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Nov 16, 2017
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Everybody can judge except me
I have no Wright to judge anyone... Man or Woman I have no right because I have no rights My rights were stripped away the first time I lost my sanity I have no right to love or to be loved For me Love is a Myth I have never experienced that emotion cause everytime I think I am close I lose which I thought love was... There is no love for me...Love is death to me and I have yet been pronounced deceased I am a disease that festers in a body which has known only agony and despair It's rare for me to find happiness yet I'm always in pursuit for that which Time and Time again always eludes E or Me or whoever I am Fuck all the pretty Pety shit my name is... Roll Roll Roll ur boat gently on a beam of Light Roll ur Grass in a leaf and roll it tight If you lose more then you smoke Then U ain't smoking it Rightously Obnoxious spiittiinngg Bars ... Til I'm unconscious...I'm the Man muthafucka I'm the Man You ain't a fan well soon enough you'll understand...never under I'm In a Rover with windows that don't Rol or am I in a Maybac with doors that don't close Expose myself to a Woman ina room without windows never I'm doing good it can't get no better
About This Poem
Last Few Words: The First Shall Be Last and The Last Shall be Who?
Style/Type: Free verse
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Numero Negativ…
7 years 7 months ago
Mmmm Mmmm Mmmm
I'm in Love with the shape of P.U.S.S.Y. if I wasn't what would be my reason to lie
Numero Negativ…
7 years 7 months ago
That's Ur Problem
First off your Bi-Polar... Second of all your Schzo-effective...third of All you just plane Stupid
Shut the Fuck Up no one wants to Hear this shit at allllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Numero Negativ…
7 years 7 months ago
Hmmmmmm!!!
Well I guess U told me? Huh? Da fuck is your problem with me anyway? mr. meany
Numero Negativ…
7 years 7 months ago
nothing is wrong or right it
nothing is wrong or right it just is exactly what it is supposed to be...I know what's right and what's wrong...how many commandments are there anyway? Peace