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EVERYNIGHT
Every night I look up at the moon, wondering if I'm doomed! they always say your a flower;bloom! all these trials and tribulations make me feel like I'm never gunna make it too that room. I always knew I was entergalatic since the day I came outta da womb .one day folks gon read Rip KRW on a tomb. so I tell em yooo while I'm standin make room; I'm coming through jumping over brooms. get it? when I'm on scene I light up the room, I'm not a diamond in da rough I'ma rough diamond just like the moon even at night I'm shinin I know you feel my rhymin! progression ,obsession, hear my possession, harmony is a big reflection but guess what I was a selection check my projection.
WRITTEN BY: KEANNA .W. #AKA GODDESSG
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 year 11 months ago
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Lavender
1 year 11 months ago
Everynight
Hello, Keanna,
Your writing is poetry rap. Very nice rhythm. Perfect for live performance and spoken poetry. Hope you have an open mic venue to showcase your talent!
Best,
Lavender
Pop GoddessG666
1 year 11 months ago
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your feedback. I greatly appreciate it, and hopefully soon enough I'll beill be Infront of a audience showcasing my talent.