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weirdelf
weirdelf
Aug 06, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

To Experience The Numinous Is Really Very Easy, Without Sacred Molecules

With practice,
a notion of Sphinx,
a couple of blinks
a dance
and a glance at a sunrise
will do it.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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raj

7 years 2 months ago

Hi Jess

you have put across the message very nicely in this short write...the way I read it is that for a strong spiritual connection religious beliefs may not be necessary....reads smoothly too... a pleasure read..
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raj

7 years 2 months ago

My pleasure Jess to read such

My pleasure Jess to read such a well crafted meaningful short poem..
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Geezer

Geezer

7 years 2 months ago

Best of you...

in a while! A truly wordy title, but without such, one might have gone off into the sunset and completely misinterpreted the intent as just being a flashback! Sorry, no criticism. ~Gee.
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weirdelf

weirdelf

7 years 2 months ago

Ta mate

I don't know why but really long titles on really short poems always make me smile.

IRiz

IRiz

7 years 1 month ago

Brilliant elegance

Hi Jess,
That one I want to hang on my wall. It feels like an open window.
Your poem conveys the thouught and the mood perfectly. The tittle is not needed to my opinion it just says the same in a weird way.
Pleasure to read your new poems.

weirdelf

weirdelf

7 years 1 month ago

Thank you,

my friend.
That is a comment truly worth getting.

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scribbler

7 years 1 month ago

OOPSY

Do you realize your using the spine allows religion to sneak into your poem ? But the intent still comes through.

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scribbler

7 years 1 month ago

Well

In my opinion any experience which leaves a person awe struck is like a religious experience. BTW previous comment should have said SPINX instead of spine lol. But let's not argue religion, good enough that we can experience stuff that leaves us speechless........