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Jan 18, 2013
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Expressions
The art of getting through
like a canvas filled with sadness,
a word that causes thought
yields us to our common steps.
Standing on the desert butte
just as the sun goes down,
within the orange magnificence
I stretch to kiss the clouds.
A look-at-me-I'm-sexy waitress
working for her tips,
one whiff of her flavored naughtiness
I can't help but flirt a bit.
A garden path with the smells of spring
the flowing creek where the bullfrog sings
the bountiful grass around my apple tree
a handful of dirt settles my energy
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
themoonman
12 years 5 months ago
Mr. Crud,
Good to see you back man, glad you liked my
little wordings. The dirt, I have always loved planting
a few things here and there and find it quite settling,
almost therapeutic.
thanks eph !!!
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
Hello Richard
I have missed reading you I really loved this one it reminded me of my dad he loves poking around in the dirt he is 84 this year.
a really good write I am glad I found looking around
hugs Jayne-Chloe xxx
btw the imagery was awesome I forgot to add
themoonman
12 years 5 months ago
Hi Jayne,
84 and still working the dirt, that is great!!!
thank you Jayne and I'm glad it hit home
Ian.T
12 years 5 months ago
Richard
I loved this write.
After reading Jayne's piece I went outside and beat the hell out of some Dirt lol.
Yours as always, Ian.T
themoonman
12 years 5 months ago
Ian,
thank you Sir, be careful of rocks !!!