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Feb 24, 2015
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Exultation
The seed sprouted into a sapling
I willed it on to green
soon amidst the greens I saw pink,
may be real or just a dream.
Then I felt the flutter
of youthful exuberance
touch me, engulf me, entice me;
as I watched the dream unfold
right before my eyes, when
from amidst the bud emerged
a blooming, blushing, charming You
my lips rushed to claim, with a brush on dew.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
10 years 4 months ago
lol
What a dream Ra
nicely written
love judy
xxxj
Sparrow
10 years 4 months ago
Raj
A neat short write and the theme was good just put another way,
Take care, Yours Ian
raj
10 years 4 months ago
Judyanne & Ian
Thanks for your time and comment. Appreciated.
Regards,