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Fading Memories

for just a moment 
our love existed
then like a mist
it was gone

the sight of red roses growing
in backyards
remind me of the time
we spent together
and seared petals 
that bloomed to early
withered in the light

herbs thriving in drooping baskets 
from rooftops 
makes me think of you

prosperous veggies 
outside in the backyard
make me smile

the thing I missed the most
is your strong shoulders
taking me in your arms
carrying my weaken body 
into your palace

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Ian.T

Ian.T

13 years ago

Barbara

That someone is in so many things seems to point out that they are still there no matter how or why they are not physical..
Hold onto these things they will be needed later..
Loved the memories there in your eyes I have many of those also But!!!!!!
Yours Ian.T

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years ago

Dear Barbara,

It sounds like a summer time love to me :)

In this line:
carrying my weaken body

should it be: carrying my {weakened} body?

a good read.
always, Cat