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Feb 06, 2023
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Failure
As hard as I try I’m unsuccessful
Of amending my faults
Promises, words and prayers
Don’t yield successful results
But only continue to affirm my
Weaknesses and add to my
Grief and sadness
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
RoseBlack
2 years 5 months ago
Clentin
Such a sad, honest write. We are all a work in progress and flawed. The fact that you keep trying to improve yourself says something! Good job.
Clentin
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you. Just a comment on
Thank you. Just a comment on the difficulty improvement
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
It takes time
I started “healing” like 3 years ago. It’s just a long process and it’s like playing a sport or an instrument, you have to practice and fail a lot before you get decent at it. Just hang in there.
Tim