Fallen Leaf

The leaf lay there,
having completed its first purpose.

Now, with green colors receding,
it gives a final performance. The stage its own,

showcasing a myriad of unexpected hues,
highlighted by droplets of water.

The language of color
telling a story for anyone to see.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Comments

Lavender

1 month 2 weeks ago

Fallen Leaf

The circle of life - in unimaginable hues.

Beautiful, Michael!

Thank you!

Michael Anthony

1 month 1 week ago

Appreciate your comments L -…

Appreciate your comments L - thank you!

Geezer

1 month 2 weeks ago

I was...

startled to see the word [anyone] and not everyone. I would love to believe that it was by design; meaning that it is available for everyone to see, but not everyone will. Nicely done, ~ Geez.

Michael Anthony

1 month 1 week ago

Thanks Geez! Very perceptive regarding the use of the word anyone - it was intentional. I often try to convey the concept that simple beauty is often overlooked by many in our too busy world. Thanks for commenting.

Rula

1 month 2 weeks ago

Antony

It's fair enough to say that this is inspiring, at least for me.

Enjoyable to read.

Thank you for sharing!

Michael Anthony

1 month 1 week ago

Always appreciate your…

Always appreciate your visits Rula - thank you!

Ruby Lord

1 month 1 week ago

Hi Michael, why haven't you…

Hi Michael, why haven't you entered your poem into the leaf hunting category? I think your poem is well written, and it emphasises the process each leaf will go through on its journey. Great poem, Ruby.

Michael Anthony

1 month 1 week ago