Falling

The moment when
Everything is
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Apart
But yet it’s
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Right
Into place

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Country/Region: United States

5 years 11 months ago

Words pieced and placed, so perfectly
as poetry
embraced

5 years 11 months ago

5 years 11 months ago

I like the form. A bit small and not much to critique. I hope that you find a voice here and look forward to seeing more of your work. ~ Geezer.
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5 years 11 months ago

Thank you I appreciate any comments good or not! I look
Forward to sharing my work here!