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Mar 16, 2021
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Falling
Falling is the only thing I feel
When I fall I feel free
Free from people
Free from life
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 7 months ago
I've heard...
the same thing about many things in life. So many people have different things to make their life here on Earth bearable.
I'm sure that you have the wish to fly! Flying is the most wonderful; feeling! I have flown [as a passenger] in a few small planes. Or maybe, you would enjoy sky-diving more? That is something I have never done, but would like to have tried.
Anyway, I like the simplistic and concise way that you have written this. Nothing at all to crit.~ Geezer.
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Gracy
4 years 7 months ago
Hi Tea, I love the simplicity
Hi Tea, I love the simplicity of your lines, expressing such important feelings. Flying is wonderful. I used to get panicky for a long time, but then I enjoyed it so much and still do.
I love your theme and the spacing, just wondering why it's so sensitive. Maybe you'd rather not say, that's OK.
Gracy