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Fear Me Not

I was not born a killer
but I have known Death
as a friend
off to soldier a war with himself
as an unborn
laid to rest by his maiden
each wandering my mind hand-in-hand
In the sixty seven dark days of Barrow

I was not born a killer
but I have tasted Death
at first the shiver of vinegar
now the sweet palate of fine wine
followed by a chocolate dipped berry
each filling the belly of my soul
with a hunger for more

I was not born a killer
but I have taken cover in her sheets
as a virgin gone mad with lust
now a man fulfilling her every need
having sewn my seed
with every church bell ring

I was not born a killer
but make no mistake
I am Death
Fear me not
for I shall not walk, nor eat, nor lay with you
as the only prey I shall hunt
is
me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Henry Rollins, Langston Hughes, Emily Dickinson

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Comments

judyanne

judyanne

10 years 5 months ago

a powerful write Scott

But I am having trouble connecting the end to the rest - it seems to contradict - but that is probably just me being obtuse

Great descriptive and word play
love judy
xxx

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eightmenout

10 years 5 months ago

Judy

Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Appreciate the compliment.

There is no contradiction as it is a description of hurting ones self.

Thanks again

Rula

Rula

10 years 5 months ago

I think Scott

wanted to show that the narrator is not only a killer but he is the Death him/itself. If so, there is no contradiction. But then "Fear me not" is an eluding (intentionally, I believe) title.