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Sep 01, 2022
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Feel my butterfly From hay.....now on display
Feel my butterfly
Blind fold me love
let my hair flow
upon my face
bring about a glow
see me as you wish where-ever
let me feel your fingers quiver all over
sending sweet electric shocks
down my spine...
hold me around my waist
let me feel you hard
as times advance
hold me so tight
let me feel a comfort slight
as when buds sprouts all about
life would be bliss without doubt
hold me again
let me bear
the pain of love
enjoy newer spasm of joy…
just hold me
like a butterfly fly...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
2 years 10 months ago
Hi loved
A good one in my opinion
lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
Stan you are all Neos right guidance man
that's why I'm your fan
since we were here
nearly as twins born
Your sincere views
I adorn
lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
any more reads
please