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Feb 11, 2025
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Feelings
Anxious
Sad reflections
Of unreal things each day
Besetting all my thoughts with fear
Worried
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
One
4 months 3 weeks ago
Short...
...but enough!
You've set a tone of unease & distress, pulling the me, the reader, into a state of mental struggle. I struggle alongside you.
regards
One
Clentin
4 months 3 weeks ago
Thank you for reading and
Thank you for reading and your comments.
mark
4 months 3 weeks ago
Big Brother
or something of the likes has you exactly where you are wanted.
Have some fun. Let it go. Don't give a shit so long as ya don't get hurt.
Some fleeting thoughts that might make sense.
Saying a lot in a short poem...good poetry!
Mark
Clentin
4 months 3 weeks ago
Thank Mark for reading and
Thank Mark for reading and comments. Frustration passes!
mark
4 months 3 weeks ago
Everything passes
at our age we know that. Sooner or later.
Enjoy the moment my friend,
You are welcome...