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Sep 05, 2020
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The field
In the grass
Here I lie.
Here until
The day I die.
I stray away
From the light.
Until darkness
I may fright.
It's okay
As time may pass.
The further I go
The further it lasts.
So here i lie in the grass
Here until the day I pass.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dandini
4 years 6 months ago
Not very cheerful!
Not very cheerful!