Fields of snow

Away we go
sliding
through the
sleek silken
fields of snow .
that grows
out a
golden guilded glow.
cementing
into our hearts
several
subliminal streams
of serenity.
That had
hid itself away
from the insidious
sight seekers of
suburbia.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: If it’s not organized very well well I’m writing this while in pain so it might be a little distracted and out of focus.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

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Comments

Candlewitch

3 years 2 months ago

hello Edward,

instead of golden gilted glow, try (golden gilded glow)

Candlewitch

3 years 2 months ago

hello Edward,

I like your poem...it made perfect sense to me, except the part about suburbia.
*hugs, Cat

Candlewitch

3 years 2 months ago

I reread the poem,

and even that part made good sense to me.

Edward nigma

3 years 2 months ago

Thank you

What I meant by that part was that it’s beauty was kept safe away from the modernization and industrialization of humanity .