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Jul 24, 2022
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The fiery fluttering phoenix
A fiery phoenix
freely
fluttering
It’s withering
white wings
of innocence
amongst the
sullen silken air .
preparing
to shed away
all worldly
cares and cries
as it repeatedly
replies with the
gallant guiltless
guild of
goodbyes.
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 11 months ago
Alliteration
I absolutely adore alliteration. Lol.
as it repeatedly
replies with the
gallant guiltless
guild of
goodbyes.
That’s really good,
Tim
Edward nigma
2 years 11 months ago
Thank you
When I do alliteration in poetry I usually alliterate 1 or two letters
In order for it to have a good flow anything more than two it would too convoluted and lose its flow. Like for example
The hectic humdrum hound
with his cynical snout
solemnly sneering
at the ground .