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lonlyhrtsclub13
lonlyhrtsclub13
Feb 28, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Final Bow

The show is over
Time for me to go
There have been highs
And an all time low

We played together
Until it fell apart
Then played alone
With a broken heart

As the curtain calls
Remember how
I loved you all
As I take my final bow

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison, Rudyard Kipling, Hermann Hesse, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Jack London, Stephen King, there are many more....

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raj

7 years 8 months ago

Carrie

the poem has a very easy flow with good word usage to express helplessness and yet satisfaction of giving it your all

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lonlyhrtsclub13

lonlyhrtsclub13

7 years 8 months ago

Thank you

I seem to better with short verse.

Rula

Rula

7 years 8 months ago

Hey Carrie

I not only like your rhyms , but also the message.Simple and clear.
Hope it's not autobiographical though.
Regards

lonlyhrtsclub13

lonlyhrtsclub13

7 years 8 months ago

Thank you

I seem to do better at short verse. I tend to get sloppy with a lot of words. This makes more sense.