first

moving so swift
I dont want to touch down
to swallow this pain

alone
in all whirlpool sensations
just let me drown

put on this iron crown
let love's chains
drag me down

.....

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

Esker

14 years 4 months ago

staying calm

been here
for so many years
in country

lahlahland has more turns then I ever expected
and Im pleased that there are people
whom are treasures

your comments are poems as are others
they for me are more worth then my works

maybe Im finally turning towards a more
human me

I'll never truly know

...

Nordic cloud

14 years 3 months ago

Oh this surrealist picture is

Oh this surrealist picture is extraordinary,
swallowing pain
touch down, heavy,
whirpool
drown love's
chains
iron

So many weights and strengths
expressing themselves in us
as we read.

LuvAnn.