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faerybeki
faerybeki
Mar 20, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

First Anniversary

Poetry is for life, not just
Anniversaries. I've always loved your
Perfect soul, it's scent
Etched into the heart of my
Remembering.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: An acrostic for my husband on our wedding anniversary :))

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: GBR

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faerybeki

faerybeki

14 years 3 months ago

Thank you Shirl :)) the poor

Thank you Shirl :)) the poor thing is in bed with a nasty bug, we've been poorly all week :( so I didn't have a chance to do anything but make a card and write a poem :) words are the best thing a poet can give eh? ;) much love Beki xxx

R

raj

14 years 3 months ago

Dear Beki..

a lovely soul write to celebrate your anniversary...wishing there be many more of them and your beautifull writings too...

the anniversary expereince must have been heightened by the supermoon...

much love...

faerybeki

faerybeki

14 years 3 months ago

Thank you Raj :) yes, I

Thank you Raj :) yes, I envisage a whole series of acrostics over the coming years :) and we had a wonderful experience last night, took the telescope up to a near by hill, the moon was INCREDIBLE!! I am very blessed, much love Beki xxx

R

raj

14 years 3 months ago

Beki it would great to read

Beki it would great to read those acrostics which you will share with us here....good to know you had a super anniversary celebrations in incredible suppermoonlight...

much love and greetings..

R

raj

14 years 3 months ago

Neopoet would be as wonderful

Neopoet would be as wonderful as you and thew rest of us would like it to be and your poetry would have also matured more n more like a fine matured wine for others to sip n savour...

much love...

faerybeki

faerybeki

14 years 3 months ago

Ta very much Bee :) he'd

Ta very much Bee :) he'd agree with you but in truth I'm the lucky one :) glad you liked the poem, much love Beki xxx

M

magics02

14 years 3 months ago

Fairy

I love your thoughts and this write.

Blessings
Mona

faerybeki

faerybeki

14 years 3 months ago

:))) aww thanks Mona, it's

:))) aww thanks Mona, it's funny I'm never sure how personal writes such as this will go down with people, they hold such meaning for me but might be nonsense to another, glad you liked it, blessings and much love back, Beki xxx

Race_9togo

Race_9togo

14 years 3 months ago

Hi Beki

This is good, I like the sentiment, and the last two lines are wonderful.
I like the acrositc too, a nice touch.
Lucky Mr. Beki, getting a poem like this!
Well done.
I wish joy for you and your family, in the year to come, and for many, many after.

faerybeki

faerybeki

14 years 3 months ago

:))) Thanks Jim, glad you

:))) Thanks Jim, glad you liked it, and I wish the same for you! much love Beki xxx
Ps did I see somewhere that you home school? would you mind if I pmd you to ask about your experiences? more love xx

Race_9togo

Race_9togo

14 years 3 months ago

Beki

Yes I home school. lt is easy in Indiana, where I live. Feel free to PM me on the subject, I'd be happy to answer any questions about it.

S

scribbler

14 years 3 months ago

faery

may your paper turn to gold....................scribbler

faerybeki

faerybeki

14 years 3 months ago

My darling Jayne, a couple of

My darling Jayne, a couple of days to sort life AND stuff!! I knew you were special lol it's taking me forever ;) Never apologise babe your presence here is perfect and always makes me smile :)) Happy you liked the poem hon, we still swirl, lots, know that even when I'm not in touch I'm still in touch lol think about you often lovely and always with love, HUGS Beki xxx