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Apr 11, 2022
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A flamboyant flower
A flamboyant flower
taunts and
towers .
Over every
clever
clean green
clover .
That is left
to shrivel
itself away
within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 3 months ago
The sibilant Ess...
snakes its way through this entire poem! I thoroughly enjoyed this! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
3 years 3 months ago
Thank you
And I thoroughly enjoy your company.
Alliteration I use or alliterate one letter so it doesn’t get convoluted and it will have a nice flow.
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
hello Edward,
within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.
sounds like a get-together-dinner with my family!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
I hope you are well
Edward nigma
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you
Thank you for your comment I fully enjoy your presence.
Ray Whitaker
3 years 2 months ago
I think you are writing better than ever
IMO a large improvement! Nice work!
Edward nigma
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you
Well when you get used to writing the more you write. The more you will improve.