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FLARING

Daylight burns fastest at day's end
as sun sprints toward the western trees
and shadows stretch before they blend
while light spears shrink to a mere tease.

I think of this before the fire
as it blazes late at night,
how hottest flames quickly expire
once they've shed their brightest light.

Even combustion of decay
begins slowly but ends up fast
until it comes that final day
when wood crumbles into dust at last.

Little surprise we are the same,
we start out as a tiny spark
then live our lives as a bright flame
flaring before the final dark.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

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About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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raj

10 years 8 months ago

Stan

you have captured light (life), flames (youth), crumbling (aging) and darkness very creatively and effectively...

Regards,

S

scribbler

10 years 8 months ago

hi raj

Thank you. It's not too easy to cover this subject in a way that's not worn out lol. Always good to see you've come by......stan