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Jan 28, 2013
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Flints of Fire
Until the battle recedes
no more
and the earth has tilted
beyond its axis,
when the wind
gusts to appall
as in ancient
history,
forgotten
I shall remember,
As a muniment
of minutes
broke,
the sheath of silk
covering my id,
unveiled the majesty
and wonder,
ambrosia
energy flowing
in neon tubes
Revealed
in the pain
and suffering
an atom of joy,
You
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Esker
12 years 5 months ago
intense and beautiful
"ambrosia energy flowing in neon tubes"
great line....and the last
"You"
that exulted love~
for all loves!
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
thank you
That exulted love that punch
was what I aimed for
I appreciate it
Love Jc xxx
loved
12 years 5 months ago
is this supposed to be meta...what forical
'''''''the sheath of silk
covering my id,
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
It could be metaphorical
It could be metaphorical depends what way you take it
Jc xxx
loved
12 years 5 months ago
it seems you didn't like
my indiscretion
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
I am tired sorry and can't
I am tired sorry and can't sleep
There was no indiscretion just a honest question
Love Jc xxx
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
thanks Eph
Glad you liked it ...
Love n hugs Jc xxx
Frenchf
12 years 5 months ago
Was it muniment
Or was it monument
If the former. what does it mean?
Loved it whatever!
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
hey french
It's muniment I will copy the definition off one of my other poems can't do it on my phone lol glad you liked it
Jc xxx
loved
12 years 5 months ago
Google is the way lady
A Muniment or Muniment of Title is a legal term for a document, or other evidence, that indicates ownership of an asset. The word is derived from munimentum, the Latin word for a defensive fortification. In other words, "muniments of title" means the written evidence which a land owner can use to defend title to his estate.[1]
Frenchf
12 years 5 months ago
ha ha
thanks I have no muniment. Stolen in divorce!