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Mar 17, 2012
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The Fog
There are times
still
when the fog
rolls in
and you can't see
for sheer
density
You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you
but that is ok
Being lost
in the fog
brings it's own
beauty
About This Poem
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Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 3 months ago
Hello.
You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you
WOW!!!
always, Cat
faerybeki
13 years 3 months ago
Hello :)
Hello :)
it's ok to forget.. and wonderful to remember, love to you Cat xxx
Esker
13 years 3 months ago
dead reckoning
what intuition spoke of
guiding
overwhelmned till the site
becomes the vision
bright and soft
fulfilling focus
memories sometimes tricky
like a compass spinning
we rely on gifts
this lost momentum
like flying in a cloud
faerybeki
13 years 3 months ago
More reliant than ever on
More reliant than ever on gifts, from all directions, such as this comment is :)) Thank you xxx
Cloudthings
13 years 3 months ago
Home, my darling sister...
Home, my darling sister... straight to the heart.
xx
faerybeki
13 years 3 months ago
:)) mmmm your heart, sister,
:)) mmmm your heart, sister, what a beautiful place to be xxx