FOLIAGE IS

Beautiful
in HOPES FOR EVER WE REMAIN
Birds come and sing
then fly away
that's life's ways always

none has come for ever to stay
life is like forest foliage

autumn may come as it may
great foliage smoulders away
you too may

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Music has always been the biggest cure for maladies of love be sure i did love playing in a band now i am deaf can't self cure but read lips and mind musifies it thanks all

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Candlewitch

3 years 1 month ago

dear lovedly,

I really like what you wrote in the last notes: " read lips and mind (musifies) it thanks all" musifies" what a great term!

yes, we fly high for awhile, especially when we are young...then we move on to the conclusion of our lives.

*hugs, Cat

lovedly

3 years 1 month ago

Thanks Cat

LIKE SHAKES...I too create new words

Geezer

3 years 1 month ago

Yep...

Musifying it does it for me too! Good work.~ Geez.
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lovedly

3 years 1 month ago

thanks GEE

For your yeps
ooo lalala lalala