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Sep 23, 2013
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Forbidden
Only angels lament
with the moon rising as
days grow shorter and poems
are distant in the light. Do not
leave the word love all alone to
wither on a tree like a half-eaten
apple core.
Just whisper a tender
goodbye.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
11 years 9 months ago
so tender
I liked the mood of this dear Anna.
I'd start a new stanza with "Do not leave the world love alone....
but it's your poem and you know better what you want to say.
Thanks for sharing
Esker
10 years 5 months ago
tasted and forgotten...
best to be pondered then ignored
half eaten
post love..
excellent poem
about forbidden
Thank You!
Sparrow
10 years 5 months ago
Anna
There will be no goodbyes as the whispered love will draw you closer.
Lovely write but NO goodbyes, Yours, Ian xx