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Jun 06, 2022
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FOREST OF LIFE
IN THE FOREST
I'm hiding seeing
you are reading my poetry
as time glances by
I read you hidden
below autumn leaves
i still visualize the beach
swimming afloat
many poets still for me dote
do you from far off land
should I from you expect a vote
do quickly quote
ere my life they say
poet wrote
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
3 years 1 month ago
hi loved
this one starts out strong but then ends weak.......kinda like we old folks lol
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
thanx
Stan at times I also scribble
age slips
but cannot skip