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faithmairee
faithmairee
Jun 20, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

forever yours

should the moon
retreat forever
behind a darkened sky
and all the stars
fall earthbound
without their
twinkling light
if the sun should
cease to rise
the clouds go
their separate ways
and all the birds
no longer soar
i still will
not forget you
for, in all truth
i am forever yours

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About the Author

Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

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faithmairee

faithmairee

14 years ago

Dear Cat

I'm honored you feel that way. I've always admired and respected you so I'm humbled as well. Thank you, Dear Lady!

Love,

Faith

R

raj

14 years ago

Dear Faith

a lovely dedication for a loved one expressing unconditional love..

much love..

faithmairee

faithmairee

14 years ago

Dear Raj

Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them very much.

Love,

Faith

Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

14 years ago

faith

It seems that you like to write in 'enjambment" good stuff here, I enjoyed it much!

Eddie