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Apr 23, 2024
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Forged in Fire
Out of the darkness, he pulled me
with all his strength and grace.
He swept me up and carried me
through the fire.
He tore down my walls and
Used the stones for our foundation.
His hand kisses my cheek
And wipes away the tears
He tends to my wounds
And holds me as I heal
Forged in fire
Our bond is unbreakable
Blessed am I,
For I know love in its purest form
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
neopoet
1 year 2 months ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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Geezer
1 year 2 months ago
I think that...
the AI is copping out. You do not explain the statement that you know love in its purest form, but I think that it hardly matters.
It paints a picture of someone supremely happy with the relationship. ~ Geezer.
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Kristen H.
1 year 2 months ago
Thank you..
Very much, Geezer. I can't see any response from AI on my end, so if it said something about my last line... well, it's news to me. Lol!
Geezer
1 year 2 months ago
The lack...
of response is what I am speaking of. It says that it does not seem feasible to offer feedback. ~ Geez.
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MermaidMaster
1 year 2 months ago
Hi Kristen!
Beautiful work once again! What a brilliant description of love! I'm so happy you are able to experience a relationship so strong and wonderful.
Best,
MM
Kristen H.
1 year 2 months ago
Thank you...
So much, MM!