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FRAMED a la BLAME

"that button" is calling his name
will he blink, or just plink for the fame?
"it's so tempting" he thinks
it's a "kink" on the brink!
and to think who'll carry the blame

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Struggling trying to find a catchy title, although strictly, limericks don't have titles. It's like titling haiku...

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

1 week 3 days ago

Thank you for giving me a smile!

Your clever thoughts churned into words cause delight in their conceptual array, not surprising. I like this play with words! I do not understand why members are reading, but not responding!

fondly, Cat