Super-hero or a Villain?

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Frances resists

Frances resists,
So William persists,
But Frances insists
That William desists,
So she slaps at his wrist.
But William persists.
“stop it” is hissed,
But William persists,
So she sees a red mist,
But William persists,
And out come her fists,
But William persists.
Then comes the twist,
Her lips he enlists,
And when Frances is kissed
She gets most of the gist
So she starts to assist,
As William persists
And her charms are not missed
by Mister or Miss.

THEN William desists.
………so Frances gets pissed.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Country/Region: England

Comments

Candlewitch

3 years ago

LOL!

very entertaining!!!

*hugs, Cat

Entend2u

3 years ago

Thanks Cat.

Thanks Cat.
Frances was a teaser about whom books may be written one day. Sadly not by me.

Jackweb

3 years ago

Welcome aboard!

THE SOUND PATTERN:
resists,
persists,
insists
desists,
wrist.
persists.
hissed,
persists,
mist,
persists,
fists,
persists.
twist,
enlists,
kissed,
gist,
assist,
persists,
missed,
Miss.

The kind of repetition that most people associate with poetry is the repetition of sound, in particular in rhyme. Apart from rhyme, there are other sound patterns in poetry which creates additional meaning, such as assonance, alliteration and onomatopoeia.

Such sound effects always have a specific function in a poem.