Free Verse Poet

Great, I’m free

As is all my free verse poetry
Not many read me
As I speak in riddles
but that doesn't irk me,
as free I am
as a soaring bird ought to be,
Out above the horizon
Where humanity is not limited...

I soar beyond all oceans and time
I bother not about meter or rhyme
if none read me it isn't a crime.
for Loved is creativity
hence that name of mine.

Seek not any recognition
the best will come out of you
and
so I will let you read my poetry
comment only if you do.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Candlewitch

13 years 4 months ago

Dear Loved,

Good poem. I have a suggestion:

In this line: "if none read me ’tis isn't a crime" i think this line should be: (if none read me it isn't a crime.) or (if none read me 'tis not a crime) because the contraction of 'tis is of "it is"
I like these lines:

As I speak in riddles
but that doesn't irk me,
as free I am
as a soaring bird ought to be,
Out above the horizon
Where humanity is not limited...

always, Cat

loved

13 years 4 months ago

thanks for the keen observation

i too was a bit doubtful
but my laps top
kingraid stuff
had okayed it
(if none read me it isn't a crime. ok

Willy

13 years 4 months ago

expressions of freedom always

expressions of freedom always carry with them, if not an overt, an under current of arrogance. I think you dealt with your refusal to be constrained by certain conventions while not being offensive. Good piece

Always Willy