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Mar 25, 2025
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FRIENDSHIP
A STAR HAS FIVE ENDS.
A SQUARE HAS FOUR ENDS.
A TRIANGLE HAS THREE ENDS.
A LINE HAS TWO ENDS
BUT A CIRCLE OF OUR
FRIENDSHIP HAS NO END.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Did I need more lines in my poem?
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
3 months 2 weeks ago
Neopoet AI (Premium) - version 3.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
Consider varying the repetition of the word "ends" to avoid redundancy and enhance reader engagement. Additionally, the poem could benefit from more vivid imagery or metaphorical depth to strengthen the emotional impact of the friendship theme. The transition from geometric shapes to friendship is clear, but exploring the symbolic significance of each shape more thoroughly could add layers of meaning. Finally, consider refining the phrase "circle of our friendship" to a more concise or original expression, as this phrase is somewhat common and may diminish the poem's overall uniqueness.
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