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Oct 13, 2013
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Frosting with time
Frost
was a wonder poet
Frost
now frosted by time
as we all some day
will and shall and must and ought to be
as time spares none
neither you nor me //I
so as our time goes by
let us our minds
in the wilderness freely fly
seek the unknown
and mark in stone
someday we shall also be known
as engraved pieces of clay
with homes unknown
let us frost
ere snow arrives
who knows what may later arise
and we will be lost in oblivion
and
with no surprise
nor a prize
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
11 years 9 months ago
oh dear, Loved
much as I agree with this poem, you may have just offended your greatest supporter, Stan.
loved
11 years 9 months ago
oh no not really
he is a lovely neo
excellent poetry
loved
11 years 9 months ago
I JUST REREAD UR COMMENT DID NOT READ STAN IS HE A FROSTMAN
HELLO STAN My
our only man
who reads me whenever he can
hasn't since long time I ran
mand
11 years 9 months ago
Hi loved
Love the title! I looked up the author and enjoyed reading his poems! He left something special behind! as have you!
Love Mand xxxx
loved
11 years 9 months ago
glad for you
and
thanks for saying
what have u
Ian.T
11 years 9 months ago
Loved
Stan will love this as it will bring a few more people to read the works of Frost and there are many that have never heard of him, Yenti being one lol,
Yours Ian.T