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Nov 29, 2011
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On funny verse
Your funny bone is plain to see
and tickles me with musely glee
oh, write for fun or fucks or tears
it all comes down to test of years
sometimes to shock is cause enough
to call your sullen reader's bluff
but when you give your reader humour
ideas can grow, much like a tumour.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Inspired by Wesley's "A Triolet"
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
13 years 7 months ago
I am in awe of the change.
I am in awe of the change. Sting at the end--Martial's epigrams.
weirdelf
13 years 7 months ago
the change in my works?
Honestly man, you can take some credit. When I insensitively and stupidly dismissed one of your poems and you had the courage to call me on it I had to take a deep look at myself and my motivations.
You may not be a substitute for my slutty muse, but you keep me honest.
Geremia
13 years 7 months ago
I think,then, we have been
I think,then, we have been a great help to each other.
Joe
wesley snow
13 years 7 months ago
Missed this somehow.
Wicked. wesley
weirdelf
13 years 5 months ago
wicked is word I love applied to my work!
It's actually a little piece I really like.
Candlewitch
13 years 5 months ago
*Grins...
You don't know how good it is to see you posting work here!!! Wesely is right, it is a wicked little piece and shows your mischievous side. DE-lightful!!!
oh, write for fun or fucks or tears
it all comes down to test of years
sometimes to shock is cause enough
to call your sullen reader's bluff
always, cat (& eddy)