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Jul 10, 2013
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G u n n B e l t z
the glass slippery with its lean
the tap flowing
silent drops
and an outside rain
thunders down like a wave
of scorn
torn is the winter arriving
the hurricane ferocity
a candle lament
and the darkness screaming
through a velvet fear
burning letters
firing fonts
and vortice
whorls
the old worlds
the carnival
joy
of exposure
in the lost
our land
of Lah
beneath the
surfs rush
the hoofbeat
tempo
the fire
deep
within the well
where all the
love was drown.....
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lonlyhrtsclub13
12 years ago
the end
Of love as we knew it...taken and twisted by a vicious world, our pasts lost with the changing of the times. Sunshine taken over by harsh winter weather...destroying what once was...just my interpretation. Love the language, as usual. Another powerful write..thank you Steven.
Ian.T
12 years ago
Steve
A tale of destruction
Your introduction
To feed off of feel
Drown by thoughtlessness
Corroded by nature
Tortured to death
Nature also heals
Things love steals
The world turns on
You can belong
It is your eyes
They must learn to see
The things
Laid out before you
Journey on
Can't see
Around sharp corners
Yours Ian.T