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Rosewood Apothecary
Rosewood Apothecary
Jan 19, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Gallery of the Heart

Our palette of love
Multitudinous colors
Blended together
Like our writhing bodies
A masterpiece in the making
This canvas of skin
Wet with perspiration
In the gallery of our hearts

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

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Comments

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you

She makes an art out of living life. She puts up with me and all my “nuances”. Lol. That in itself is an art too!

Tim

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear RA

this is excellent! the only way to improve it would be to employ whips and chains and a bit of blood. but that is only my jaded opinion ;)

*ever, eddy

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 5 months ago

You simply must...

supply us with a copy of that photo, [if it is allowed]. You are truly the arm-candy you describe. Sweet and perfect accessory. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

lovedly

2 years 5 months ago

wow

very beautiful poemy
How happy am I you read me RA

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dear Tim

Oh my God. I am going to come back to this one time and again. Its superb. As powerful as a nuclear bomb and at the same time as sublimely sensuous as a stolen moment.

Bellissimo Bravo.

Bookmarked.

Kindest regards Jayne

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 4 months ago

Thanks

Yes it was well received. In fact, her photo was chosen as one of four pieces to be given awards. I’m very proud of her. She is an accomplished photographer.

Tim