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Oct 26, 2011
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THE GENTLE TOUCH OF GRACE -major rewrite
I felt something lingering near
terrifying and unforgiving
waiting somewhere.
The noise of living broke
into a silence, fading pale
and I fell into dreaming.
I dreamed of rivers flowing crimson red
fields of wheat burning black
flames ripping through raging skies
I saw angels with dark wings spread
singing unholy litanies
souls lost to Heaven on their knees
God was dead…
then a holy man called me by name
back to the world I knew.
He anointed my head with oil
and I was made safe again
free from fear
cleansed of sin
by magic prayers
and the gentle touch of Grace.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kailashana2
13 years 8 months ago
This poem flows well, just a
This poem flows well, just a hint of unforced rhythm and rhyme, as if you were touched by grace
;-)
Amazing Grace sung by 9yr old: http://www.godvine.com/9-Year-Old-Boy-Sings-Amazing-Grace-My-Chains-are…
~A
Geremia
13 years 8 months ago
THANKS, my Anna and Raj. I
THANKS, my Anna and Raj. I will fix it.
Joe
raj
13 years 8 months ago
Joe
i agree with Anna....
Geremia
13 years 8 months ago
Thank you, Rosnella. All
Thank you, Rosnella. All changes made. Much appreciated.
Love
Joe