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Dec 25, 2022
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Gifts
You give your words to me
You stimulate my mind
I’m always better for
Treasures that I find
Myriad of poetry
Connects us over time
Clearer than a satellite,
Direct or private line
You let me take a step inside
Inviting and sincere
Wrapped in verses from your hearts
Upon your sleeves you bare
A thousand heartfelt thank-you’s
I can’t express by words
Yet that’s exactly what they are
No matter how obscured
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I hope you all have a festive and safe day no matter your beliefs. Sending out gratitude and love. Tim
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 6 months ago
dear brother, Tim,
such a passionate write. it feels like you have been here forever. you have an intuition and understanding that feels so wise. you are loved. happy holidays to you and yours.
*L and H, Cat
Lavender
2 years 6 months ago
Gifts
Hello, Tim!
So lovely! I completely understand the feeling behind your poem, because I feel it, too. I enjoy and learn so much from your poetry, and all poetry here. Sharing poetry puts us all in the most vulnerable and most personal status. But. also the most rewarding. I appreciate this, and all your poems so very much. The best to you in this coming New Year.
L
Candlewitch
2 years 6 months ago
dear Tim, a p.s.
I feel much like Lavender. you are very much appreciated
*ever, eddy