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Writing With Emotions

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Glacial Creeping - Fear- writing with emototion

Glacial sweat creeping down the back of my neck
trickling through my senses
penetrating my reserves.

Brittle nerves fracturing with the strain
Try to scream nothing emanates
I’m mute.

Racked and shaken
On my knees
Gripping on for safety

Catatonic with dread
As foot steps draw near
Cold blade between the ribs.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

LOL

My first draft of my hate poem could be used as my anger poem as you said that it was more that than hate LOL!!!

Lou

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

hi

i suppose i must be filled with a lot of anger.

Lou