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The Glass at my Feet

With every sip from the bottle
and each gulp from my cup,

I know a smack of my lips
will say exactly what's up.

Everytime I remember
everything I regret,

it appears to consume me
and put me deeper in debt.

So, I sing songs that I know
with tunes that make me smile,

I sing of every journey
and, the heart of each mile;

if no one else can remember
then, it was mine to forget,

so, I sing louder for volume
and, make it a part of my "set".

Now, I'm sipping from bottles
and cups strewn, all astray,

some from just last night
others from yesterday.

I remember times, dearly
with all moments, so sweet,

and with a last smack of the lips
I'll lay my glass at my feet.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I was told by someone that, this poem was "morose".....(Not, "moronic".) It was then, that I was mortally wounded, and greatly, highly offended. Such is my plight, I now.....digress. docmaverick.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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raj

13 years 11 months ago

i am not sure if you have

i am not sure if you have digressed since i have not read the original version of this write...to me this poem is nice soliloquy of a person who frequents his past and gets gripped in it....one of the very few two line verses i have read here which are so expressive...

docmaverick

docmaverick

13 years 10 months ago

I literally....

...am astounded that, someone stepped up to this page.
Go figure,
thanx sincerely,
docmaverick.

docmaverick

docmaverick

13 years 10 months ago

Jess....

..I actually write "blues lyrics" in my band; so I really have shied away from including them, here. Believe me...they're pretty dismal, even though at times, comical.
Been out of it with a bad run of luck, of late.
thanx,
doc.