Lavender

Mar 01, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Glass Slipper

Surely your poem
was written just for me

because

when I slipped it on
it fit perfectly

and I was transformed
into all the magic

I always wanted to be

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For the Poets...

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dearest L

Sigh your writing of late has been superlative.

It's a real privilege to read your poetry. And a joy for me.

Brava!

I hope the magic in all of us rubs off.

Much love Jayne xxx

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Hello, Jayne,

I have REALLY enjoyed reading a lot of poetry lately, your beautiful words included. The inspiration has been invigorating!
Much love,
Lxxx

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

I love this

Makes me think of Cinderella but instead of the glass slipper, she is wrapped in words. Beautifully done.

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Hello, Carrie,

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and your touching poetry!
L

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 4 months ago

This is one of the most well timed things

Great job. The title and theme are very congruent. I like the brevity, the point comes across very clear despite the duration.

Awesome
Tim

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you, Tim,

I'm glad you liked this. And thanks for sharing all your wonderful "magic"
L

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Hello, Mark,

So much to love and learn by reading everyone's poetry. Very inspiring.
Thank you!
L

Entend2u

2 years 4 months ago

Oooooh!

........give me more Lavender - but don't share them - just send them to me and I will write you whatever it takes!

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Good morning!

Poetry truly does transform our thoughts, and then transforms us. I am enjoying all the magic here! Thank you for reading and sharing!
L

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Good morning, Kat,

I agree - words are powerful. Thank you for reading and sharing your powerful poetry.
L

Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

dear Lavender,

I love your title and theme! the message is so very lovely. the poem; simple and sweet. you are a breath of fresh air!

*love, Cat
we are our poetry!

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Hello, Cat,

It's always so good to share the love of poetry, and I appreciate you sharing yours.
Thank you!
Lx