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Edna Sweetlove
Edna Sweetlove
May 13, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

God and Moses Have A Chat

God said:
"I got five commandments, already".

Moses said:
"How much you vont for them, my dear?"

God said:
"They're free, yet."

And Moses said:
"I'll take two packs, Oy vay."

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: London, Culture Capital of the World

Favorite Poets: Siegfried Sassoon, Wilfred Owen, Rupert Brooke, Chaucer, Shakespeare to name but a few. And VERY IMPORTANTLY: Erich Fried, a leftwing Austrian of Jewish ancestry who fled the Nazis and became a British citizen in 1949., And, other writers (non-poets mainly): Raymond Chandler, Irvine Welsh, Anthony Burgess, Graham Greene, Charles Bukowski, John le Carré, Anthony Horowitz, Mick Herron, Margaret Attwood, Edna O'Brian, Maeve Binchy., Writers who I find vastly over-rated: TS Eliot, Virgina Woolf, Sylvia Plath, Phil Larkin, E.A. Poe, A. Ginsburg, Longfellow, Gerald Manley Hopkins (actually I LOATHE Hopkins more than damson-dappled words can say).

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Dandini

Dandini

4 years 9 months ago

I found this under the

I found this under the "undiscovered works" tab - it is very funny. I am amazed that no one has commented on it for eight months - is there no justice?