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Rhyme Crimes

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Gone with the Wind

"Gone with the Wind" at cinemas,
A favourite with the mas and pas
But not so dear to you and I
For we were younger, didn't sigh
When Gable's goodbye at the door
(a loser in the civil war)
Meant Southern Belle was out of luck
When she heard "I don't give a damn."

About This Poem

Last Few Words: yes, there is a rhyme to be found

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: GBR

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judyanne

judyanne

12 years 11 months ago

lol

is this exercise two?
lol - i am looking forward to your exercise 3 xx

"Gone with the WIN-d" at CIN-eMAS,
A favourite with the MAS and PAS
But not so dear TO YOU and I
For we WERE younGER, didn't SIGH
When Gable's goodBYE at the DOOR
(a loser in the civil WAR)
Meant Southern Belle was out of luck
When she heard "I don't give a damn."

any more?
still smiling
love judy
xxxx

S

scribbler

12 years 11 months ago

Hello

What Rett would say in this cruder age would probably complete this mind rhyme............stan

weirdelf

weirdelf

12 years 10 months ago

It must be noted,

I can't remember the correct term for the implied rhyme,
in the last line.

Actually, I loved the movie, does this mean I'm a conservative lesbian?