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Jun 28, 2012
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Gone with the Wind
"Gone with the Wind" at cinemas,
A favourite with the mas and pas
But not so dear to you and I
For we were younger, didn't sigh
When Gable's goodbye at the door
(a loser in the civil war)
Meant Southern Belle was out of luck
When she heard "I don't give a damn."
About This Poem
Last Few Words: yes, there is a rhyme to be found
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
12 years 11 months ago
lol
is this exercise two?
lol - i am looking forward to your exercise 3 xx
"Gone with the WIN-d" at CIN-eMAS,
A favourite with the MAS and PAS
But not so dear TO YOU and I
For we WERE younGER, didn't SIGH
When Gable's goodBYE at the DOOR
(a loser in the civil WAR)
Meant Southern Belle was out of luck
When she heard "I don't give a damn."
any more?
still smiling
love judy
xxxx
scribbler
12 years 11 months ago
Hello
What Rett would say in this cruder age would probably complete this mind rhyme............stan
weirdelf
12 years 10 months ago
It must be noted,
I can't remember the correct term for the implied rhyme,
in the last line.
Actually, I loved the movie, does this mean I'm a conservative lesbian?