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Kristen H.
Feb 19, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week February 19th to February 25th 2023

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Good Morning

Good morning, I say
As I stretch the sidewalk
Making room for strangers to walk through my day
Leaving but footprints in their wake

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg, Walt Whitman , Misha Collins, John Donne

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Comments

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dear Kristen H.

I see my old cat stretching himself over the pavement in the winter sun, I'm probably totally off, but this is an excellent short poem.

I see nothing I would change or edit.

Well done!!

kind regards Seren

K

Kristen H.

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you!

Interpretation is always up to the reader. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Exactly, it's the perfection

Exactly, it's the perfection and beauty of poetry it can take us all to different places and times and dimensions.

kindest Regards Seren