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Jun 12, 2020
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Good Morning O World
The world today
is an exceedingly
isolated
very lonely alien's place
on each face
a mark do trace
today we are here
tomorrow
do not our steps trace
we may have been taken away
by the
ALMIGHTY'S
SENTINELS GRACE
Still keep your steady pace
I shall remain also
at my destined palace
Be it the wishes of
HIS
I say
where in New York
would anyone try to chalk one's
way
today the most
riskiest place
— lovedly, Jun 12, 2020
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Last Few Words: UNDER THE PREVAILING ENVIRONMENT- WHO KNOWS- NOT EVEN ANY GOD -JUST NAME ONE
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
tyro
6 years ago
Hi lovedly I agree with you
Hi lovedly I agree with you about the state of the world today. I also like that first stanza.
lovedly
6 years ago
thanks to you two and others ...who would love it too
''The world today
is an exceedingly
isolated
very lonely alien's place
on each face
a mark do trace''
Geezer
6 years ago
It is true...
that mankind does not connect with the Earth as he used to. Too bad, as it is all we have. No place to go and no time to get there. So let's take care of the only home we have. ~.Geez.
.
lovedly
6 years ago
yeah Gee each home thanks for the coming
''So let's take care of the only home we have.''
how TRUE
HOME
MY HOME
YOUR HOME
MANKIND'S HOME
NATURE AND EARTH
OUR ONLY HOME
since aeons
thence and still hence
no pretense
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