Gran's Diet

Sausages and chips,
sauces and dips,
thoughts of them
has me licking my lips
forgetting the hips

So I'm going to back away
as I remember
what my granny used to say
makes me smile
as I recall her sniggers
"little pickers, bigger knickers"

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ireland, IRL

Comments

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

cute

but who has body image issues?

sueb

12 years 6 months ago

thanks jess think we all have

thanks jess think we all have in one form or another

Ian.T

12 years 6 months ago

Have read several of your poems in fact all of them, that I haven't commented much is that I was waiting for a longish serious piece from you, as I sit here listening to Danny Boy and the lyrics are telling me a story would just love to here such a story from your pen, Yours Ian.T

sueb

12 years 6 months ago

Hi Ian I'm as deep as a

Hi Ian I'm as deep as a puddle but I will try a more serious one but I've been told their soppy maybe I'm better with the humor have a gr8 day all the best Sueb x

Gran's Diet

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Love your gran

thanks a mil x

cute

thanks jess think we all have

Sueb

Hi Ian I'm as deep as a